【11408学习记录】考研英语写作急救包：通知文提分核心公式｜结构拆解×句式升级×真题实战
通知文
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- 2010年考研英语（一）真题小作文
- 题目分析
- 写作思路
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- 第一段
- 第二段
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- 锦囊妙句1
- 锦囊妙句3
- 锦囊妙句4
- 锦囊妙句5
- 锦囊妙句11
- 第三段
- 妙句成文
- 每日一句
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- 词汇
- 第一步：找谓语
- 第二步：断句
- 第三步：简化
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- 主句
- 定语从句
- 并列分句
英语
写作
2010年考研英语（一）真题小作文
Directions：
You are supposed to write for the Postgraduates’ Association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization. The notice should include the basic qualifications for applicants and other information which you think is relevant.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. Use “Postgraduates’ Association” instead. (10 points)
题目分析
题目要求以"研究生会"的名义写一则关于全球化国际会议招募志愿者的通知，该通知需包含申请者的基本资格要求以及其他相关信息。这是考研英语历史上首次出现通知类题目。
写作思路
第一段
需要介绍背景，介绍即将举办国际会议，同时表明通知的目的是招募志愿者。
第二段
需要基于题目，灵活修改以下锦囊妙句，通过合理的串联，快速构建一篇内容翔实、理由充分的文章。以下是备选锦囊妙句：
锦囊妙句1
- 趣味运动会计划于2025年12月26日下午2:00在我们大学的学生活动中心/腾讯会议软件/江苏省江阴市华西村举行，将持续3小时/天。（此外，本次活动将通过抖音进行直播。）
The fun sports day is scheduled to be held on December 26, 2025, at 2 PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university / via the Tencent Meeting app / in Huaxi Village, Jiangyin City, Jiangsu Province, and it will last for 3 hours/days.(In addition, the event will be live-streamed on TikTok.)
本次会议计划于2010年12月26日下午2:00在我们大学的学生活动中心举行，将持续3天。
The conference is scheduled to be held on December 26,2010, at 2 PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 days.
锦囊妙句3
- 活动将由一系列环节组成，比如才艺展示和与专家互动交流。我们学校的校长将为所有参与者致欢迎辞/为优胜者颁奖。
This event will consist of a series of activities, such as talent shows and interactive exchanges with experts. Our university president will deliver a welcome address to all participants/will present awards to the winners.
活动将由一系列环节组成，比如主题演讲和分组讨论。我们的校长将为所有参与者致欢迎辞。
The event will consist of a series of activities,such as keynote speeches and group discussions. Our university president will deliver a welcome address to all participants.
锦囊妙句4
- 我们需要10名志愿者，有相关经验者优先。此外，合作精神，守时的品质，以及平易近人的性格正是某人所看重/具备的。
We need 10 volunteers, preferably those with relevant experience. Furthermore, a cooperative spirit, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities sb. is/are looking for./that sb. possess(es).
我们需要10名志愿者，有相关经验者优先。此外，合作精神、守时的品质，以及平易近人的性格正是我们所看重的
We need 10 volunteers, preferably those with relevant experience. Furthermore, a cooperative spirit, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities we are looking for.
锦囊妙句5
- 如果你有时间来参加，这次活动对你来说将会是一次有意义且难忘的经历。
If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.
如果你有时间来参加，这次活动对你来说将会是一次有意义且难忘的经历。
If you have the time to participate, this event will be a meaningful and unforgettable experience for you.
锦囊妙句11
- 你应该遵守相关的规定，确保安全/保持安静，并且不要乱扔垃圾。
You are expected to follow the relevant regulations, ensure your own safety/keep silence, and avoid littering.
你应该遵守相关的规定，保持安静，并且不要乱扔垃圾。
You are expected to follow the relevant regulations, keep silence, and avoid littering.
第三段
鼓励参与，如"如果你对这个活动感兴趣，请扫描二维码注册报名"。
妙句成文
Notice
December 10,2010
I hope this notice finds you well. An international conference on globalization will be held. The intention of this notice is to recruit volunteers.
First and foremost，the conference is scheduled to be held on December 26,2010, at 2 PM in the Students’ Recreation Center of our university,and it will last for 3 days.【妙句1】What is more, the event will consist of a series of activities, such as keynote speeches and group discussions. Our university president will deliver a welcome address to all participants.【妙句3】
Last but not least，we need 10 volunteers，preferably those with relevant experience. Furthermore, a cooperative spirit, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities we are looking for.【妙句4】
If you are interested in this activity，please scan the QR code to register.
Postgraduates’ Association
每日一句
In short, the image that best represents the current crisis is the stereotypical cartoon scene of a man sitting at the breakfast table with a newspaper held up in front of his face, while a woman glares at the back of it, wanting to talk.(2010, Reading Comprehension, Part A Text 2)
词汇
in short: 简而言之
represent: v. 表现；代表
representation: n. 代表；表现；陈述
representative:
- n. 代表；典型
- adj. 表现的，体现的；典型的，有代表性的；代议制的
current crisis: 当前的危机
crisis: n. 危机，危急关头
第一步：找谓语
In short, the image that best represents the current crisis is the stereotypical cartoon scene of a man sitting at the breakfast table with a newspaper held up in front of his face, while a woman glares at the back of it, wanting to talk.
第二步：断句
原句中有3个谓语，包含3件事，可以断开为3句话：
- represents为that引导的定语从句的谓语部分
- is为主句的谓语部分
- glares为while连接的并列分句的谓语部分
按照标点符号、引导词以及谓语动词进行断句，可以断开为3句：
- In short, the image …… is the stereotypical cartoon scene of a man sitting at the breakfast table with a newspaper held up in front of his face, —— 主句
- that best represents the current crisis —— 定语从句
- while a woman glares at the back of it, wanting to talk. —— 并列分句
第三步：简化
主句
In short, the image …… is the stereotypical cartoon scene of a man sitting at the breakfast table with a newspaper held up in front of his face,
- 介词短语：in short 为评注性状语，修饰整个句子，表示总结
- 定冠词the 修饰名词image
- 名词 image 为主句主语
- 系动词 is 为主句谓语，主句为主系表结构
- 表语部分：the stereotypical cartoon scene
- 名词 scene 为表语核心词
- 定冠词 the 修饰表语核心词
- 形容词 stereotypical 修饰名词 cartoon
- 名词 cartoon 与形容词stereotypical 共同构成前置定语修饰表语核心词
- 介词短语：of a man sitting 为表语后置定语
- 不定冠词 a 修饰名词 man
- 现在分词 sitting 为名词 man的后置定语
- 介词短语：at the breakfast table 地点状语，修饰分词sitting，说明sitting的位置
- 定冠词 the 和名词 breakfast 共同修饰名词table
- 介词短语：with a newspaper held up 为伴随状语，修饰分词sitting
- 不定冠词 a 修饰名词 newspaper
- 名词newspaper 为该部分的核心词
- 过去分词短语 held up修饰核心词 newspaper，表示被动——被举起
- 介词短语：in front of his face 为地点状语，表示held的具体位置
- 介词短语 of his face 为front的后置定语
- 物主代词 his 修饰名词face
去掉主句中的扩展部分，就得到了句子的核心：
- …… image …… is …… scene …… —— ……想象……是……场景……
定语从句
that best represents the current crisis
- that 为定语从句引导词，为句子核心，代指名词image，在从句中充当主语，补充说明主句主语image；
- 副词 best 修饰动词represents
- 动词 represents 为从句谓语部分
- 定冠词 the 和形容词 current 共同组成名词crisis的前置定语
- 名词 crisis 为从句宾语
去掉从句中的扩展部分，就得到了句子的核心：
- that …… represents …… crisis —— 形象 …… 代表 …… 危机
并列分句
while a woman glares at the back of it, wanting to talk.
- while 为并列连词，连接两个并列动作，为句子核心
- 不定冠词 a 修饰名词 woman
- 名词 woman 为分句主语
- 动词 glares 为分句谓语
- 介词短语：at the back of it 为地点状语，表示glares的位置
- 定冠词 the 修饰名词back
- back 为核心词
- 介词短语：of it 为back的后置定语
- 现在分词短语：wanting to talk 为伴随状语，修饰整个分句，说明主语的主观想法
- 介词短语 to talk 为现在分词的宾语
去掉从句中的扩展部分，就得到了句子的核心：
- while …… woman glares …… —— 而……女人盯着……